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I wanna write something profound
That I’ll say
Every day
Of my life
Till I find you

I wanna hear some really new sound
Cos I don’t
Get amused
With the blues
Not something I can use

Give me the sound of
The troubles of the earth
Lets have some meaning
Here with us right now
It don’t have to be
To wordy or special
Just profound

I wanna think something profound
That I’ll know
Every day
Of my life
Till I’m with you

We got it here in the sunshine
Don’t you wait
Fornicate
With your mate
Its O.K.
Cos they love you

I wanna hear some really raw sound
Music’s fun
Number one
Under the sun
Well for me babe

I wanna live in the big world
Cos it’s really
Quite special
The gas and the metals
It’s made of

Show me the sunshine
That lives within your heart
I study chemistry
That doesn’t mean I’m smart
Just give me a hint
That you understand me
Profoundly

I wanna live something profound
That I’ll be
Every day
Of my life
While I’m with you
this is a song i wrote the other day
the words arent very good
but its effective when u hear it....
so yeah
working title-any suggestions??
xx
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Loconn's avatar
Ohhh Ohhhh Ohhhh
I found a word which changes the meaning of the verse slightly but which still feels right.
Instead of fornicate try recreate.

"We got it here in the sunshine
Don’t you wait
Recreate
With your mate
Its O.K.
Cos they love you"

Although I'll always know that it's truly fornicate recreate will make it more of a PG song.
It's also the word I could use to describe the way I feel when I'm with you.
Every moment with you recreates me as a better man just from being near your brilliance. It recreates me because I don't need any past or future because you don't base opinions on past or expect anything of my future. You love me for who I am in that moment,
recreated,
reborn,
reborn to be with you.